Wednesday, November 09, 2005

42. The Map of Lost Desires

Lust is the map of our unfilled desires.
Past love: the collective altar of unstoked fires.

Each maiden a pithy offering
to the burning loin’s pyre.
Stepping stones on the path
through a deeper quagmire.

Each night bears her wicked treats:
Mammon’s stench stokes her fervent pleas.
A still-lingering touch sets those senses alight.
As our twisting flames quench alien delights.

As darkness turns us to searing naked ore,
Into our bronzed casts, flows molten pleasure.
Wicked nights transmute to unwelcome dawns,
As heathen bodies celebrate a parabolic pause.

Love’s twilight rages in these scattered streams:
Tangled webs beneath those subterranean sheets.
As we stare into tunnelled sunbeams,
Amber flames meld her silver-lined dreams.

Lust is the map of our unfilled desires.
Past love: the collective altar of unstoked fires.
Love is the map of our spent desires.
Pure lust: the collective path of raging fires.

11 comments:

:..M..: said...

Been a long time since I read you :) Thanks for dropping by my blog. How're you doing?

Zii said...

amen!

The Wandering Hermit said...

very impressive...
& very beautifully written
cheers
z

death said...

WOW!!! I mean Wow!! How does a pome get any better!??

An absolute treat!! Wanna make love after a pome like that :D

That Girl said...

Hi:) thanks for dropping by my blog... i like the way you use such expressive and exacting words...

youre welcome anytime!

Arunima said...

"Each maiden a pithy offering to the burning loin's pyre"
lot of attitude in this line. Something made me smile too.

Manasi said...

Entrapped!!
truly, the words used and images drawn are beyond imagination.After all, Its imagination that knows no bounds......

Anck su Namun said...

Looks like I never learnt english :-(

Anyways good one (to the extent I understood)

And thanx for dropping by mine :-)

Innocent Bullet said...

Is this the longish poem on which I commented on the Caferati Board?

And Dinesh, you're yourself such an accomplished poet; any suggestion/ recommendation from you is welcomed though as poets we always reserve the right to implement it. ;-)

Cheers

AWY said...

i am in a bit of a quandry at the moment about love and lust...
this just serves to confuse me more... but it still touches a chord somewhere...
nice...

Monami Roy said...

Past love: the collective altar of unstoked fires.

nice post.